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Once a peacefull nation, Tameria was wiped off the face of the world by an army so vast and powerful they never stood a chance. One Tamerian survived the massacre. He is the last of his race and wakes up in a land which is not his own. He somehow made it all the way across the ocean to Ardannia. There he needs to rediscover himself and shake off the past that is haunting him each time he goes to sleep. Ardannia, the land he wakes up in is soon targeted by the army that wiped his homeland from the face of the earth. Will he be able to do anything this time or will he be as powerless as when they struck his homeland?
by ~Markus-Yamainu
The world of far awayThe world of far awayThe world of far away
“Grandpa, grandpa! Tell us one more story, just one!” They said in chorus. “Well…one last story then.” The old, grey bearded, man replied as he gave the five year old twin brothers a stroke on the head. The two brothers nestled themselves against their grandfather as they sat by the fireplace. Three steamy mugs of hot coco were on the ground next to them, their grandfather picked up one of the mugs and took a few sips before he started with his tale.
“There is a land far from here, it is filled with m
by ~Markus-Yamainu
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Lindor's Luminaries 5Seyzhavye’s arrival caused surprisingly little stir, to my relief. Though she insisted on following me around most of the time, she left her helmet and most of her weapons in the stable where she had set up her bedroll. Nobody really knew where to put her, since Wystan didn’t want to inflict her on the servants’ quarters and putting her in the guards’ barracks was absolutely out of the question, so it was a relief when she declared her intent to sleep in the stable with her horse. I wouldn’t have trusted the beast that much, but she claimed to have raised it from a foal and trained itLindor's Luminaries 5
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Lindor's Luminaries 4I didn’t know what I was going to do once I had reached the room I’d slept in. I didn’t really want to go back to sleep, and I didn’t really want to sit and stare at the wall either. I attempted to pace and realized I was still wearing Ysaere’s court dress, which was a good deal longer than any skirt I was used to dealing with. I should probably change out of it before I damaged it.Lindor's Luminaries 4
After several minutes fumbling with laces of various kinds, the dress was laid out on the bed and I was wearing a forest green outfit similar to the gold one I’d been wearing the day befor
by ~Aranov
Lindor's Luminaries 3Lady Ysaere woke me up again, but this time it was morning. “Hello, dear!” she said, flinging the curtains open. “We have to get you ready to see the Queen!”Lindor's Luminaries 3
I blinked at the sudden blaze of sunlight, still groggy. “Yes ma’am.”
“Come. We’ll find you something suitable before the audience hour.”
“Finding something suitable” ended up meaning “ransacking the entirety of Lady Ysaere’s wardrobe”. I, although initially enthusiastic about the opportunity to go through a Lindor
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Hmm...this should be fun.
) and accompanying each theme you're supposed to draw a manga picture to it.
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| Hey I know this dude...oh wait, it's me>.< Like it says in the Deviation description, I was losing a card game very badly, hence the grumpy look  Me wearing my favourite sweater(and only for that matter...) Pretty much the same as in my first journal entry. My name is Tom, I'm from The Netherlands. Love to read and write. Addicted to music (I don't go anywhere without my music, ever) and I like to hang around with my friends. I also have a girlfriend which I'm together with now for almost half a year (love you honey!) with which I spend allot of time. Well there's allot more to me so ask away if you want to know something. |
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- Current Residence: The Netherlands
- Interests: Reading, listening to music, writing, hanging out/partying with friends
- Favourite movie: Gladiator
- Favourite band or musician: Rise Against / 10 Years / Ellegarden
- Favourite genre of music: I don't have a set genre
- Favourite artist: Dean Oyebo
- Favourite poet or writer: David Gemmell / Karen Miller
- Operating System: Sadly...Vista...-.-'
- MP3 player of choice: Ipod Touch
- Favourite game: Final Fantasy IX
- Favourite gaming platform: Don't have one, aslong as the platform has good games I'm in
- Favourite cartoon character: Don't know...I have allot I guess
- Personal Quote: "People's stupidity never ceases to amaze me..." (sadly...)
- Tools of the Trade: Pen, paper, an overactive immagination and a too active mind
- Email: Faldain@gmail.com
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I just can't wait to be dubber è___é
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Jennifer,
The Blue Narian
and any other names I may be known by. ^_^;
"There is no one without scars on thier heart. If there was such a person, they would be a shallow soul."
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Jennifer,
The Blue Narian
and any other names I may be known by. ^_^;
"There is no one without scars on thier heart. If there was such a person, they would be a shallow soul."
Other than the occasional grammar/spelling mistake I see here and there the story is fine imho.
Plus I think most writers (except the cocky ones ofcourse
I like it anyway
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